推薦信范文分析
.Nrq729 { display:none; } Dear Sir:
It is my pleasure to recommend Mr. Fu-ping Wang for his application to graduate studies in your school.
Mr. Wang has been my research assistant of the National Science Council's project "The United States and the United Nations' Financial Crisis: The Role of www.vapeomega.com Congress" since September 1997. His major responsibilities include information collecting, analyzing and translating. He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with extremely high potentiality. Mr. Wang is not only quick at learning and good at solving difficult problems, but also with a logical mind that enables him to effectively analyze difficulties. All the work handed to him was completed satisfactorily. Actually, he is so reliable that I assign him with heavy responsibilities. With his help, I have been able to spend more time in writing the research paper. I really consider myself very fortunate to have such a capable assistant.
I am certain his diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality, will assure him of academic achievements in his future academic pursuits. I strongly recommend his admission without any reservation. www.vapeomega.com
Sincerely yours,
Chung Wei-kuo
Research Fellow and Professor
The Institute of European and American Studies
Academia Sinica
以上這封推薦信分析:
如果這是封為介紹工作的推薦信,那還不錯;但對於對申請研究生來說,不太夠說服力.
以下這點是這封推薦信一定需要改正的.這封推薦信不夠明確。
不夠明確是推薦信不的大忌,就是從信中我們只看到推薦人很努力地用了一大堆形容詞,試著告訴對方,申請人很「聰明」、「有激情」、「有潛力」、「有思考能力」等等,可例證沒有力.這推薦信又未能指出這個申請者與將要進入的研究領(lǐng)域的關(guān)聯(lián)。
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It is my pleasure to recommend Mr. Fu-ping Wang for his application to graduate studies in your school.
Mr. Wang has been my research assistant of the National Science Council's project "The United States and the United Nations' Financial Crisis: The Role of www.vapeomega.com Congress" since September 1997. His major responsibilities include information collecting, analyzing and translating. He is an enthusiastic and progressive young man with extremely high potentiality. Mr. Wang is not only quick at learning and good at solving difficult problems, but also with a logical mind that enables him to effectively analyze difficulties. All the work handed to him was completed satisfactorily. Actually, he is so reliable that I assign him with heavy responsibilities. With his help, I have been able to spend more time in writing the research paper. I really consider myself very fortunate to have such a capable assistant.
I am certain his diligence, coupled with a good competence and pleasant personality, will assure him of academic achievements in his future academic pursuits. I strongly recommend his admission without any reservation. www.vapeomega.com
Sincerely yours,
Chung Wei-kuo
Research Fellow and Professor
The Institute of European and American Studies
Academia Sinica
以上這封推薦信分析:
如果這是封為介紹工作的推薦信,那還不錯;但對於對申請研究生來說,不太夠說服力.
以下這點是這封推薦信一定需要改正的.這封推薦信不夠明確。
不夠明確是推薦信不的大忌,就是從信中我們只看到推薦人很努力地用了一大堆形容詞,試著告訴對方,申請人很「聰明」、「有激情」、「有潛力」、「有思考能力」等等,可例證沒有力.這推薦信又未能指出這個申請者與將要進入的研究領(lǐng)域的關(guān)聯(lián)。
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